Alo Vauldeen

Alo
Force Blind lvl 2

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Alo Vauldeen May 23, 2010 22:05:05 GMT -8

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Post by Alo on May 23, 2010 22:05:05 GMT -8

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Species and Gender: Rodian/male

Full name: Alo Vauldeen

Nickname(s): Squidley, Valor

Age: 23

Homeplanet: Tatooine

History: Alo Vauldeen is a Rodian who lived on the planet Tatooine. His family from the past was very strong with the force, some say his family was as strong or even stronger as Darth Vader. His father died by a Mandolorian because his father had a bounty on his head. So Aldo Vauldeen wants vengeance to all Mandolorians. When he was 7 he wanted to know the ways of the force and till this day, he still tries to track down the greatest teacher.

Personality: he has a split personality

Physical Description: Rodian, about 1 and a half meters tall, weighs at 190.

Initial path: dark side

Lightsaber fighting style: Makashi

Possessions: He has nothing but the clothes on his back and a blaster.

Powers: Force Lightening

Reference: Captian Jack Starbuck

Last Edit: May 24, 2010 19:28:32 GMT -8 by Alo

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Alo Vauldeen May 24, 2010 10:52:03 GMT -8

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Post by Eth Erzin on May 24, 2010 10:52:03 GMT -8

Seems alright to me, but I'd say you shouldn't start out with that many strong Force powers. part of the fun is developing a character, and if you already start strong, there's nowhere to grow to. So choose one of the three you listed and have only that--and even then only at a weak level--to start with.

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Alo Force Blind lvl 2 Posts: 5	Alo Vauldeen May 24, 2010 15:25:01 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Alo on May 24, 2010 15:25:01 GMT -8 ok. I will take out Force Lightening and Drain

Eth Erzin Administrator The Mastermind Auf wiedersehen Posts: 609	Alo Vauldeen May 24, 2010 15:51:53 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Eth Erzin on May 24, 2010 15:51:53 GMT -8 Oh and one other very minor thing, your display name should be the same as your character's name, so everyone can know who is who in and out of RP. So I just went ahead and fixed that for you. And with that, go ahead and begin!
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Darth Jeluvitas Force Ghost The Inspiration Posts: 519	Alo Vauldeen May 24, 2010 16:04:36 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Darth Jeluvitas on May 24, 2010 16:04:36 GMT -8 approved, but you may want to change it so you dont use a GIANT BLACK DILDO fighting style...
	Peace is a lie, there is only passion. Through passion, I gain strength. Through strength, I gain power. Through power, I gain victory. Through victory, my chains are broken. The Force shall free me. —The Sith Code

Darth Jeluvitas Force Ghost The Inspiration Posts: 519	Alo Vauldeen May 24, 2010 16:05:21 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Darth Jeluvitas on May 24, 2010 16:05:21 GMT -8 unless you do... in which case, who am i to judge?
	Peace is a lie, there is only passion. Through passion, I gain strength. Through strength, I gain power. Through power, I gain victory. Through victory, my chains are broken. The Force shall free me. —The Sith Code

Rayn Ares Administrator The Librarian Rayn Ares Nomad Posts: 285	Alo Vauldeen May 24, 2010 16:10:56 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Rayn Ares on May 24, 2010 16:10:56 GMT -8 APPROVED DAMMIT!!! Oh, and congratulations on being the first Rodian!
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Rayn Ares Administrator The Librarian Rayn Ares Nomad Posts: 285	Alo Vauldeen May 24, 2010 17:15:14 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Rayn Ares on May 24, 2010 17:15:14 GMT -8 Ohh, I see what happened Jeluvitas. It still says that in the character template. I'll go change it.
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Eth Erzin Administrator The Mastermind Auf wiedersehen Posts: 609	Alo Vauldeen May 24, 2010 19:14:48 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Eth Erzin on May 24, 2010 19:14:48 GMT -8 Fixed in-post blush
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Alo Force Blind lvl 2 Posts: 5	Alo Vauldeen May 24, 2010 19:48:01 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Alo on May 24, 2010 19:48:01 GMT -8 Ok cool! So where and how and when do i start? haha

Eth Erzin Administrator The Mastermind Auf wiedersehen Posts: 609	Alo Vauldeen May 24, 2010 21:23:54 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Eth Erzin on May 24, 2010 21:23:54 GMT -8 Wherever you want, as soon as you can.
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